Tuesday, April 26, 2011

Blog Post # 6

   Those three videos are discussion regarding matrix. Matrix is the stories that inform us where the meat and animal products approach from. Since factory farm born, they pull together and put animals into a small space closely as possible, no fresh air, cannot rough ground, even cannot turn around and add a constant dosage of antibiotic to their feed, just to keep these poor wretches alive. No matter some animals died or sick, they put them in one space and wipe out communities and put the value down. It caused over 2 million small family farm vanished. The animals the majority are the cows, the pigs, and the chickens.  We get most meats, eggs, milk and cheese from them. The factory farm as well pollutes the air and ground water, it damaged community.  On the other hand, the factory farm want the everything is express, so the meat packing become the most unsafe work in the nation.
    On the other hand, before I watched the Matrix movies, I believe the factory farm is great farm.  Because they use the technology and modern machine to supply and kill the animal, it would be quickly and cleanly. But when I watched the movies, I was surprised what I saw in the movies. It’s too terrible to the animals.  Even I can’t stand they are cutting off chicken’s beaks to avoid the chickens’ fighting.  It’s so nasty.  The factory farms even feed the baby cow in blood instead of milk; it would be with no trouble formulate the cow get mad cow disease.  They never think it is terrible for people’s health by this system.  They just follow the benefit without dependability.
          I think many factory farm products were used too much antibiotics.  That is contributing to growing problem of antibiotic-unwilling bacteria in humans.  We should buy the animal product from family farm.  The product is fresh and healthier for us.  Perhaps, we would pay more money to buy family farms’ products rather than factory farms’ products.  

 In conclusion, people should think about of our health, environment, and animal, too.We has to maintain family farm and buy product from them. Thus, it could decrease the factory farms. 

5 comments:

  1. yes, we should do something for ourselves. supporting families farms equal supporting our health.

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  2. after i saw your blogger, i have more clear about Meatrix. i totally agree with your opinion of buy products of family farm. this is useful way to protect ourselves and our family.

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  3. yes, this is good, because we have to support more family farmers, and it also to make human more health.

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  4. sorry to say but i think your essay isn't well organized.Its kind of shabby and grammatical mistakes.You used On the other hand again on the other hand which makes a reader feel boring to read and you have also repeated some words..More specific ideas to support your arguments..Taking precautions while creating an essay..

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  5. I think your structure is good. you have the summary in the introdution, but where is your thesis? You should not have an opnion in the summary. And you need evidents to prove your reasons, try to not just saying about how you feel.

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